Some people believe,there is a one. The one who points,your way to the sun. A person they believe,makes them complete The one who will support,when facing defeat.
'You are my angel',my one and only.My forever love,so we'll never be lonely. You've brought to my life,all your love and care.It made me see,when I realized how rare . . It is to meet your angel,or their lifetime one Through you.
What you've done,you've illuminated my soul.It's you and your love,that has made me whole. The feel of your love,your soft touch and caress.We're tight so close,your heart beats in my chest.
All that we have,always felt missing before. Though I love you today,tomorrow it will be more. Our love is life, we are the strongest tree.Which will always grow forever, like you and me.
You have opened my heart and held it so dear.You are my angel and will always keep it near. You have seen my ups and cared when I was low. 'You are my angel', I just need you to know.
You entered my life, through a ray of sun above and when we, we will leave together in love. my love for you has become my reason to be. I hope one day you'll find , your angel in me............
I love to write love poems for my girlfriend Kimmy Donaldson I find peace in a lot of the writing that i do. a lot of my friends say I'm an awesome writer. Some others don't really pay attention and I'm glad other people can read my poems I hope to get a lot of reviews. when I am writing I feel at ease like everything is of my shoulders its my peace at mind. some people just dont ask about what I like. I wish more people would please write a review thank you.
I think it's great you have found your peace in writing. Don't ever stop because you can only improve. What are some other topics you enjoy writing about?
ReplyDeleteAs for your writing, there are a lot of things you can improve that we'll discuss one-on-one. I'll tell you what I've told everyone else and that is to proofread before you post. Just like any assignment you need to read over your work before you submit.